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    Journal: Empathy
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    Mood: Straightening things out...
      
    I've come to realize that life isn't all that we want it to be. One of my friend lost herself in the growing void of her stress and it led her to chronic depression. Sometimes I wish I could carry her burden so she wouldn't have to be so down all the time.... My heart goes out to those who are in a similar situation and I wish the very best to you


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    Thank you for your nice, thoughtful comments on my poem "I'll Soon Be Something Of The Past".. I appreciate all that you said. It was a little hard to write on this topic... but it wasn't forced; so I enjoyed writing the poem. It also made me pause to think of the hardships people faced way before I was born and how under-privileged they were. I am glad you liked it.
    | Posted on 2010-02-11 13:19:00 | by mdsouza - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thnks for the comment on my recent post, "for the sake of hope"

    i noticed that you were asking for advice of sorts on imagery, am i right?

    if so i just have a few pointers, which could help you a lot.

    1.) invision it. - if you can see it in your mind, describe every single thing you notice, colour, light, movement, feeling, any emotional connection.

    2.) paint it. - if you see it, and you want others to see it. paint it with the best words you can think of, give things feeling, for example is it bright and exciting, or sad and dark...

    if you need more elaboration or any more tips, feel free to ask me. =]

    MDP
    | Posted on 2010-01-31 22:14:38 | by MysterydarkPoet - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanx :)
    | Posted on 2010-01-31 13:00:18 | by col13x - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your comments on cool fresh air. We do tend to get involved in our heads too much and let the joy of living pass us by.
    | Posted on 2009-08-29 00:24:48 | by my shadow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thankyou I apriecate that so much!Your one of my favorite poets on here, espeicall how your like me writing from the heart.


    Jane
    | Posted on 2009-08-28 14:43:05 | by totojane03 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thats true thankyou for the comment on my poem...



    totojane
    | Posted on 2009-08-28 14:41:57 | by totojane03 - [ Reply to This ] -



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