Lol!!!!! I was hoping you would find the sarcasim in my comment. It sounds like you did. I wanted to thank you for writing that. Seriously. Your version was the well seasoned, more experienced , possibly the full potential of the piece. Thank you for your edit? As I believe what you did was more than an edit. I'm not sure what you would technically call it, but I truly loved it . And I was completely surprised to read that. It was a learning comment. It made me want to edit and work harder on my writing to get them to that caliber. Your writings have a beautiful visual flow which I find that very difficult to do personally. It shows that each word is individual and thought through to its fullest. On a side note, I have been forgetting to take the meds my whole life! My last comment was absolutely a poke to get a rise out of you. This was my real reaction. I meant to write two pods in a pea, which was my way of showing my dexlexia. But, funny I still messed it up!
I didn't like your version. I wrote like a two year old on purpose. Thank you for pointing that out. Two peas in a pod is my own coined statement I like it that way, I think you like it that way too. It brings a smile and that was the point! And , it was something I said that day, but hey we write for different reasons right?
No demonic....it was one day before the floods In South Carolina I happen to write about my experience on the beach. Look!!!! It was fierce!! I was right. No demons. And what the hell is 9-6 feet under me?? Don't comment like you know when you.....simply don't. If curious simply be a gentle man or woman and well.......ask. Good day sir!