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ponykeeperName: Chris O ASL: 55/f/Canada Website:[ Education ] Blog: [ Blog ] Days Away: 2190 Life Story: yes [ Ignore User ] Favorites: 28 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 6264 D 17.16 Years 1.72 |
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Spending the night in Calgary :-)
Warmer here than Virginia |
| Posted on 2015-05-23 21:12:02 | by DaleP - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Got a load going to Regina, Saskatchewan,80 degrees in Texas and I gotta head to a place that's still cold
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| Posted on 2015-04-09 10:30:03 | by DaleP - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Well I found the snow its following me everywhere I go
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| Posted on 2015-01-01 21:58:52 | by DaleP - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Merry Christmasare you out playing in the snow today?
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| Posted on 2014-12-25 12:51:14 | by DaleP - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Well, I did change 'into' to 'in to' (I looked up the rules for that and saw my mistake). Regarding the lay/lie thing, I gathered that my usage is correct from looking at the link you gave me. I was using the past tense of 'lie', so it should be 'lay'. Also, if I were to change the line to:
'Have I lain in the regolith' then I would have to change the next line to: 'Have I done what I must?' While that works, I much prefer the wording I have now. All business aside, thanks for adding my piece to your favourites! It is indeed my little gift to you. "the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry" - Billy Collins -RH |
| Posted on 2014-10-04 08:39:30 | by AsiaticFox - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Thanks, ponykeeper. Glad you liked my little poem. Heeee. :D
-RH |
| Posted on 2014-10-04 07:35:47 | by AsiaticFox - [ Reply to This ] - |