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    thank you for your warmth and honesty.

    my one overall return critique would be to add or slash syllables to make each line more metered and flowing.
    | Posted on 2008-08-09 05:20:59 | by discombobulated - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i can pm you about your latest if you want, regarding making it flow a tiny bit better in places. just thought you might want to know.
    | Posted on 2008-08-01 08:56:22 | by discombobulated - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    oh, you should leave me your thoughts, no matter what, just because, and we're all crazy poets, and why not, because life is truly beautiful. and so you should be, right? don't forget, don't be easy, don't be lemon squeezy and trite. stay beautiful, stay beautiful, love light and life.

    ooo yeah. capiche?
    | Posted on 2008-02-05 23:47:13 | by silent strings - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for your comment on Hands. it meant a lot to me.

    xoxo
    | Posted on 2008-01-31 19:03:06 | by blu_kittin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment. I do feel that I have a 1st amendment and I plan to use it. I am not embarrased of my thoughts. Thank you for your support.
    | Posted on 2008-01-20 00:14:22 | by enigmaticone - [ Reply to This ] -



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