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Name: Ashley Pindyck
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 A Memory of Drumming
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 Drumming from Memory
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 The End before it Begins
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 For a Time
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 They Think We Survived-edit
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 They think we Survived
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 A year of Sun(revised)
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 I Passed by Your Plot
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 The Road to Wellville(revised
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 Skating on Sleep
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 Pain
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 The tutelage(rewrite)
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 The Tutellage
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 The Day 2
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 A year of Sun
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 The Faces of the Sun
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 The sun
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I know it might be somewhat pretentious or presumptuous of me to think people are going to know the meanings of all of these words but I assure if they did the meaning would be fairly clear . I don't know , I get caught up in these intellectual conundrums late at night and this stuff just rolls off my finger tips . I have many simpler , perhaps less abstrusely verbose works if your interested . The Quest , Persuasion , Echo , to name a few . Thanks for your time . I'll visit your page and see if any comments come up .

Bruce
| Posted on 2011-04-07 13:14:44 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Hey, thank you for your comments on "the rose", appreciated.

Johan
| Posted on 2011-04-07 07:58:47 | by Polydectes - [ Reply to This ] -
  
I tweaked y poem with you in mind. If you get a chance to read it let me know wat you think
| Posted on 2011-04-07 03:05:38 | by queendepricate - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Hi Ashley,

i just happened to read your response to my comments.from the 23rd of March..i have sometimes done the same thing...added a reply under the comment rather than hitting reply to this..

yes i saw things in your poem...maybe what you were thinking subconsciously..

but even if not..the poem spoke to me as a reader...that is what is important in poetry i think.

as for your comments on "the kiss' thank you...

i appreciate the thoughts and suggestion...although i wanted the stanzas in that order..and wanted the last line to be the last line..."i will chew on my nicorette life with you or without you...and i separated those lines between stanzas because of the gap felt in the relationship...but we all have something in mind when writing our pieces...and once we give them up for reading, the pieces belong to the reader...
the smoke lingers even after switching to the nicorette life...but i would really refrain too often from explaining a poem...because i like to let the reader see what he or she does...what i was thinking really doesn't matter so much after i let it go.
i see where a reversal might also work...depending on the way it is read...

very thoughtful suggestion and comments..

you had said in your response to my comment that you wondered how to find my poetry...all you need to do is click on the name...and it brings you to the poet's page--
and scrolling down you find the list of submissions of that poet.

hope that helps..

and again, thank you for reading me..

jacob
| Posted on 2011-04-05 00:45:52 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Sorry, my "me too" was in agreement with the previous comment made. It was such a well done comment and hit all the points that I also appreciated so why try to follow that up?
| Posted on 2011-03-24 22:57:05 | by Blue Monk - [ Reply to This ] -



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