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Thank you for the comment on The Lottery. I agree with you that I was missing a lot of details about the scenery, but I was forced to edit out much of what I would have liked to add because the short story was becomming too long for what my teacher insisted upon. Thank you for the comment, again. It was much appreciated.
I cleaned it up alot form the original. I hate the fact that I loved my father not because he is gone but because he was evil. I was trying to remember the once pleasent childhood I had and ended it with a more current thing. I guess the peome doesn't get into an explination as to why I don't like him but other ones do. Anyway thanks for the comment. ^-^