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Hi there realpoet. Thanks for the comms. Did take awhile to contemplate the in-depth significant of the whole structure you put forth.The River poem.
And I find it intriguingly daring in context. Sipping from the River of Life is like been intoxicated by the substances it contains like foam on my cuppachino.
The great sea of life where life exalted from, constantly changes as the sun, evaporates the essence that creates the forms that reflects the shapes the depths that your Souls eventually becomes.
great. Regards jm.
I'm glad you like them. I haven't posted any poetry here for a while. I've been working on a book, so a lot of my creative focus has been going towards that in recent days. But I will try to be on more often. You can always tell on this site who is a decent writer and who isn't just by the comments they give. My rule is, "Give the comments that you would like to recieve." It doesn't always happen but sometimes it does.