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    Mood: The Usual
      
    In a different lifetime, this site was once very nurturing... it may be the same location, but it isn't the same place.


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    Actually, we are really close and do have feelings for each other. I'm just consumed with self-loathing at times and need healing from the past. In fact, I have broken her heart 4 times in the last 4 months. I've left her and devoted her. She has never once treated me unkind. She is quite amazing and lovely.

    this is definitely not a one sided thing, but for some reason I'm just not secure in her feelings and I fall to rage and fly into jealousy. Its gotten a lot better and today we are even closer. Its funny because these two hard writes are among her favorites.

    thanx again.

    JP
    | Posted on 2016-11-19 21:49:29 | by rev.jpfadeproof - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    oh yeah..Im not at all suicidal and never have been, but last not i was enraged with jealousy and wrote this and part II in 15 minutes. I wish all poetry can flow so powerfully, at all times like last night.

    Fist full of pills was just coin term and not an attempt to off myself.

    thanx for the comment and concern, but I'm back to my jovial self.

    Btw, I was completely wrong. There's jealousy for you.


    JP
    | Posted on 2016-11-19 21:44:11 | by rev.jpfadeproof - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanx for the corrections and advice...I actually did type these in a hurry.


    JP
    | Posted on 2016-11-18 21:26:43 | by rev.jpfadeproof - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanx for the comment, Bill! I really appreciate it. This was literally a test. I can't say I like it, I can't say that I don't. It's s test...having said that, you're the only one to catch that I'm staying cerebral and protecting my heart.


    Thanx again
    | Posted on 2016-11-15 01:45:24 | by rev.jpfadeproof - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    | Posted on 2016-11-12 10:17:52 | by rev.jpfadeproof - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for leaving a comment on believe what you want. I'm not sure that my intention with the tone of this piece was for it to be relegated. I appreciate your feedback as it allows me to go back and see your point of view. "Was the addiction that important " is more of a pointed question. Towards my muse for this piece. And every time I saw you was a reaffirmation of the addiction which was meant to be about alcohol. Although, I know I left that way open.
    | Posted on 2016-10-31 20:07:37 | by Chelebel - [ Reply to This ] -



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