--Elite Writer Alias: samyalone Name: Samy Kilpatrick ASL: 17/f/my room Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 3579 Life Story: full of pain [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 5 Forum Posts: 2 Shoutbox Posts: 1 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 4800 D 13.15 Years 1.32 Decades 160 Months 685.71 Weeks 4.800000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: "When you love someone tell them, because you never know when you'll have the next opportunity to. Life could be over when you least expect it."
Hi I tried your Suicide one but u were off more than 5 so I will comment here.
It is well written and phrased and did bring over a sad and needless thought though.
Even in poetry Suicide is not a good option nor an brave deed even as only in thought intended. Still written words do have a tendency to surface in realize somewhere sometime.
I think a more brighter outlook may convince u of that.
Keep well. I survived the laments and rigors of youth so will u as well.
I have a brave suggestion if u will allow that: Ask your Dad kindly as u speak to your boyfriend, to write his poem.
Sorry about your poetry loss but did u ask him why? If u are still 17 I can make a guess why.
I do that with some ES submersion's mentally as well. Well literary I cannot for Mr. Webmaster will not allow that, but I would love to.