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    Featured: Erune

     The Place Where Thoughts Are Born
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     Montage
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     Caught In The Rain
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    ::Nostalgia : Class : Poetry :
     Schoolbus Route
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     The Innerworkings of A Madwoman
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     Army of Hearts
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     Nothing New Really
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     In-San-It-Y
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     Doing What I'm Not Allowed
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    ::Angry : Class : Poetry :
     Perversion
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     Cuno Sheri
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     Your Stage Now
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     Reflections of Author: Life
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     Antique
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     Depression Depression
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     The Kiss Of Eternity - For Logan
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    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     Sanctity Be Free - By Stellar Totem
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    ::Venting : Class : Poetry :
     What?
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     Diablo's Ira [WIP]
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    ||| Messages |||
      
    Hello,
    Since I could not *cough cough* figure out how to leave comments and add to favourites, I though I'd just tell you that I thoroughly enjoyed "The Place Where Thoughts are Born". It was just like a philosophical musing sould be- short but rich at thesame time.
    See you (well technically 'read you messages') later!
    -Emeera
    | Posted on 2009-06-17 01:57:23 | by Emeera - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Yes...but blunt ignorrance isnt

    It was wrong to call your work laughable,
    I didnt like the second half as it reminded me of beat poetry (and I dont really like that),

    but that was me being biased,I imagine quite a lot of people would enjoy the poem more because it continues past:

    "Winter billows in the clouds above
    Casting gray shades of mellow temperament
    I hold out my hands, close my eyes
    And I dream"

    But for me that won me over,I didnt want any more I guess

    and thank your for your comments,those two seem to me like filler poems with nice lines (as you said)

    but your feedback,insight and criticism is still very much apreciated and will be helpfull

    thanks

    -Craig


    | Posted on 2008-12-02 13:52:48 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Aye... see this chain letter just sickened me. I mean, I don't even know what to say about this damn thing, it pisses me off so much...

    It's good to see you again, Sanneh, I hope to catch sometime soon.
    | Posted on 2008-11-13 14:07:12 | by Flynn - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Phoebe! *gives you a big hug*
    | Posted on 2008-11-02 19:00:44 | by Draumrkopa - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Ahahaha I can't believe I missed you AGAIN!!! I'll try to be on tonight!
    | Posted on 2008-10-18 20:48:54 | by Flynn - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    welcome back.
    | Posted on 2008-09-18 07:49:24 | by stellartotem - [ Reply to This ] -



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