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Hi! Sorry about the random comment, I'm stuck at home and really bored :S
So yeah, just thought I'd pop in and say hi, and now I think I'll stop talking before I end up freaking you out :)
thank you dearly for the comment
i actually have chapters one thru eight already posted, plus another excerpt
its called as yet untitled
if you are interested
and i will have to read your version too
Thanks for your comment on "VIRgin land". Yeah, my that's my favourite part of the poem as well. I thought it would be neat not only to write the word "saws" but draw it as well.
That line that you didn't get:
"Abund
(ant)ance"
Was just me messing about. I was thinking "abundant, abundance" and I decided to break the words up = abund(ant), abund...ance
I normally don't try and help people out with my poetry but since your first interperetation was basically correct, I'll let you know. The line you thought was a typo was another line about appliances. It's basically a college student who panics when Hir iPod turns off, so SHe calls someone on Hir phone.
The song is just commentary on zombie college students. You basically nailed it.
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