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    Youre the first man, thanx for the comment, im kinda stuck these days.
    | Posted on 2007-10-03 08:50:01 | by Soldier O_Tears - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you dearly for the comment
    i actually have chapters one thru eight already posted, plus another excerpt
    its called as yet untitled
    if you are interested
    and i will have to read your version too

    thanks again
    xoxo
    | Posted on 2007-10-02 09:01:51 | by blu_kittin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your comment on "VIRgin land". Yeah, my that's my favourite part of the poem as well. I thought it would be neat not only to write the word "saws" but draw it as well.

    That line that you didn't get:
    "Abund
    (ant)ance"

    Was just me messing about. I was thinking "abundant, abundance" and I decided to break the words up = abund(ant), abund...ance

    | Posted on 2007-10-01 20:09:42 | by manwithnoname - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your comment on "Structured Anarchy" I knew that it was jumpy, but I didn't really realize how much so until I re-read it.

    Oh well, guess that's just me. :]

    and anything that comes out natural is good with me. Thanks for your comment, its very well appreciated.

    -Mika-
    | Posted on 2007-09-25 21:36:24 | by redskye - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I normally don't try and help people out with my poetry but since your first interperetation was basically correct, I'll let you know. The line you thought was a typo was another line about appliances. It's basically a college student who panics when Hir iPod turns off, so SHe calls someone on Hir phone.

    The song is just commentary on zombie college students. You basically nailed it.
    | Posted on 2007-09-25 10:57:44 | by NoMartyr - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i am so glad you liked recoil....i felt better after i wrote it, and then worse for feeling it again...yeah, i try to be pretty straighforward but a lot of the time it gets me in trouble so i tend to write in riddles these days

    as for that last bit:
    You disgust me with your staring, and you are always staring. I dont like you [censored], whats your problem. Dont [censored] try to talk to me. I dont want to hear it

    thats a little bit of what i want to say to her, to scream at her, to make her look away feel all the pain of how much i dislike her
    she trully does stare at me, every day, for an hour, all through envir. sci. and it gives me the creeps, cause she just sits and stares like shes thinking things she shouldnt be, especially since she knows mostly how we all feel about her
    anyway
    enough malice today, my karma cant handle it

    thanks so much for commenting, i really do appreciate it...

    xoxo
    | Posted on 2007-09-21 09:06:17 | by blu_kittin - [ Reply to This ] -



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