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    I normally don't try and help people out with my poetry but since your first interperetation was basically correct, I'll let you know. The line you thought was a typo was another line about appliances. It's basically a college student who panics when Hir iPod turns off, so SHe calls someone on Hir phone.

    The song is just commentary on zombie college students. You basically nailed it.
    | Posted on 2007-09-25 10:57:44 | by NoMartyr - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i am so glad you liked recoil....i felt better after i wrote it, and then worse for feeling it again...yeah, i try to be pretty straighforward but a lot of the time it gets me in trouble so i tend to write in riddles these days

    as for that last bit:
    You disgust me with your staring, and you are always staring. I dont like you [censored], whats your problem. Dont [censored] try to talk to me. I dont want to hear it

    thats a little bit of what i want to say to her, to scream at her, to make her look away feel all the pain of how much i dislike her
    she trully does stare at me, every day, for an hour, all through envir. sci. and it gives me the creeps, cause she just sits and stares like shes thinking things she shouldnt be, especially since she knows mostly how we all feel about her
    anyway
    enough malice today, my karma cant handle it

    thanks so much for commenting, i really do appreciate it...

    xoxo
    | Posted on 2007-09-21 09:06:17 | by blu_kittin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey Alex, thanks for the comment and glad you got a laugh out of my story.

    | Posted on 2007-07-23 13:39:27 | by hyproglo - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey man, check out my new piece called a taste of helish heaven, it tales of a one night stand that turns into one year of dying.i took the AIDS theme for this piece.Hope you like it. Anyway if you got any of candy samples video i would like to have it if you dont mind
    | Posted on 2007-06-12 01:30:25 | by Soldier O_Tears - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    anyways, of course i know slipknot,they're big in indonesia, even rites of spring. thanks for the advice man, your the best.Hey saosin is heading for indonesia this may.Hopefully all our emo boys are satisfied.
    | Posted on 2007-05-08 04:52:09 | by Soldier O_Tears - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    anyway whats the diferent of heaven with haven?
    | Posted on 2007-05-02 23:06:05 | by Soldier O_Tears - [ Reply to This ] -



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