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hey thanks for the comment and sorry to here your friends was shot infront of he/she's store and thanks for the avise and if i get the time i will try to comment your poems i am at school right now and this is the only time i get to get on eliteskills but tanks bye\
Thanks for the wonderful comment you gave me for The Storm. A poet always appreciates when his work is appreciated. I actually wrote that poem while sitting cross legged in the middle of my yard during a massive thunderstorm. The sense of wonder that the dark clouds sparked in me that night the inspiration to write something to try and capture the storm's majesty. I hope I succeeded, and with your commentary, I believe I achieved my goal. Thank you also for the fave, it certainly means a lot. Really.
Thanks for your comments on my piece of work. I will try and work on it more, you know to make those lines fit and i was also thinking adding more emotion into it. Make it alittle more personal, ya know?