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seriouscutter19Name: Hannah Banana ASL: 17,F,AUS Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 4905 Life Story: REVOLuTionary... [ Ignore User ] Favorites: 22 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 6149 D 16.85 Years 1.68 Quote: There is beauty in a breakdown... |
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Thnks for the comment, Serious cutter.
it means alot to me. Ha, this comment was... Hmm Nicer (i quess is the word im looking for) than so in the past. Im glad to hear from you. ~G :) R~ |
| Posted on 2008-09-06 06:50:17 | by GrIm:)ReApEr - [ Reply to This ] - |
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hey thanks for the comment and sorry to here your friends was shot infront of he/she's store and thanks for the avise and if i get the time i will try to comment your poems i am at school right now and this is the only time i get to get on eliteskills but tanks bye\
love jd.b |
| Posted on 2008-01-16 13:44:18 | by jjd - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Thanks for the wonderful comment you gave me for The Storm. A poet always appreciates when his work is appreciated. I actually wrote that poem while sitting cross legged in the middle of my yard during a massive thunderstorm. The sense of wonder that the dark clouds sparked in me that night the inspiration to write something to try and capture the storm's majesty. I hope I succeeded, and with your commentary, I believe I achieved my goal. Thank you also for the fave, it certainly means a lot. Really.
-Jared |
| Posted on 2007-09-20 03:38:35 | by Forest Saint - [ Reply to This ] - |
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hey thanks for the help and nice poems i like them and thanks agen bye jd
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| Posted on 2007-08-17 22:05:10 | by jjd - [ Reply to This ] - |
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woo thanks for the fave. You're the bomb.
Maybe something synonymous with tense would be good. I dunno. It just sort of came to me when I realized I was practically eating my jack in the box cup. I'm not really tense, I just chew on things. Glad you liked it! Steve |
| Posted on 2007-08-04 23:15:57 | by SpartanSteve - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Thanks for your comments on my piece of work. I will try and work on it more, you know to make those lines fit and i was also thinking adding more emotion into it. Make it alittle more personal, ya know?
Thanks anywho. PEACE OUT ~mag |
| Posted on 2007-08-04 11:41:28 | by Magger32 - [ Reply to This ] - |