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    hey, thanks for the comment on Love Sonata Under Moonlight. yeah, it was more of a vanity piece. on1neday.co.uk...that guy just disgusts me.

    he and i have a history on ES. i wish he would just delete his character profile and consider other endeavors that dont involve the word Poetry anywhere in their definitions heh heh.

    he comments on your poem, and then when you go to inspect some of his own writing, the scholarly image he attempts to create for himself is torn down by his excellent misuse of diction, of the ineptitude of his vocabulary, simple simile and misunderstanding of the semantics of human language and communication.

    poor soul, hopefully he does learn someday that poetry is not always about creating poems that speak so beautifully to the reader. sometimes its just raw emotion, meant to speak to one reader, to communicate a message in its most base element so that they might understand the rawness and uncultured nature of the message conveyed. Ill comment on a few of your other pieces here.

    but yeah it kills me, the one time i actually slack off a lil, he jumps down my Throat. well, this isnt a brothel-and this is just my method of expression.

    if you wish for more complicated poetry, i have a few posted here, such as "Girl in the Photo".
    | Posted on 2008-08-12 13:10:39 | by Loquacious Mind - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for comment on nutty poem "Galapagos". Er yes I think I know apostrophes but I made a mistake, thanks for pointing it out. The series of pieces won't appear after all because I suddenly realized they are too clever, silly, and of only regional interest. Satire is too easy & too difficult! So is free verse ... I've been in big trouble ever since I found this wonderful website!
    | Posted on 2006-11-21 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    okay, just because I'm kind pissed off about your comment on EEKS "just for you little one"
    I'm commenting here...
    the only reason why i'm kind pissed off is cause she wrote it about me.
    and i miss her SO much.
    but i guess that just shows bias according to the fact that i'm in love with her, and i think its the greatest and saddest poem ever, since it makes me remeber how things used to be, and i wish they still were...
    i guess it just kinda hurts to see something you love and cherish so much bashed by someone else.
    | Posted on 2006-08-06 00:00:00 | by Queen_of_spades - [ Reply to This ] -



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