thanx for checking out that piece
the description isnt really necessary but the night i wrote it it was... i wanted the piece to make sense and people to understand my need for writing it. it wasnt a plea for sympathy or anything... i just didnt think i would be able to cope if it was misunderstood.
thank you so much for your comments on my poems .. i really appreciated it .. also thanks for the fav add :)
as for the insight you brought to "Shattered" - thank you for that .. hahaha i didn't mean anything as deep as the blood being in her heart .. i only meant that she was the only one that was hurt ... he didn't seem to have a scratch on him .. but i prefer ur version better :)