--Elite Writer Alias: silentpoison Name: Allyson Czarsty ASL: 22/F/Teh Shire Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 1031 Life Story: life in fish bowl [ Ignore User ]
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Hey, thank you so much for your kind words on my poem "Me, Myself and Paranoia".
I enjoyed receiving and reading your thoughts on it, and I must thank you for taking the time in reading it and posting about it.
I hope to meet youin the near future, thank you so much~
Allyson, thank you for reading and commenting on "The Song Of Leaves". Much has been written about Fall colors and Autumnal seasonal changes, but nothing about the sounds of fall, so this was my effort to write something about sounds one hears in the Fall.
It is posted at the Starlight Cafe, where I can add a music score to it; the music adds tremendously to the meter and mood of the poem.
Again, thank you for commenting. By the way, you are very pretty!
For some odd reason this site will not let me comment on your writing. I just wanted to let you know, I think you are the most innovative and entertaining that I have seen on here in 2 years. Keep giving us the good stuff!
shhh can you hear the silence
surpressed in my mind is violence
i plan to stand a souless man
with the pen in my hand I'm alone in this clan
my brother dead forgotten and gone
my cousin got buried for the [censored] he did wrong
my lover... what lover she was only a whore
my career as a fighter, a teacher, no more.
can I regress to better times
progress to better rhymes
or remain unchanged with stereotypical lines?
[censored] it I'm bored, [censored]faced and pissed off....