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Thanks for the comment. I do not think the critique given was deserved, however. You said you had a problem with the last line, "to stand forever one with the broken hearted". It fits, if you read the previous line. "I loved you, and with that, I departed". Basically that line and the last line go to show that the person who got rejected had loved the other person, and then left to stand with the broken-hearted, forever more.

| Posted on 2009-06-15 09:19:35 | by Dreamer5009 - [ Reply to This ] -

Thnx for the comment, was dabbling a bit in the story writing to see how it would come out. i was trapped, beaten up and looking for a way out.

| Posted on 2009-06-02 21:59:56 | by Petals - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for the comment!

| Posted on 2009-05-30 15:11:57 | by wizardmaster - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for your thoughts again Stormy. Frank.

| Posted on 2009-05-27 17:14:43 | by Frank Maguire - [ Reply to This ] -

thank you for your comments, cause it increase my writing skills alot. I look forward for more of your comments. thanks again, Chris

| Posted on 2009-05-22 11:48:43 | by JoJoCrab - [ Reply to This ] -

Thank you for your comments Stormy ..... always appreciated. Frank.

| Posted on 2009-05-17 19:16:55 | by Frank Maguire - [ Reply to This ] -

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