Favorites: 148 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 4747 D 13.01 Years 1.3 Decades 158.23 Months 678.14 Weeks 4.747000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: True Love overcomes All
I am so incredibly blessed. Not only have i found my guiding spirit-my muse, I have found my true love and along with the love of my beautiful daughter, I am the most incredibly blessed person alive. My words are inadequate through poem or prose to describe the love I feel, the love i receive and the changes in my life, in me and I strive to capture just a piece of that in my writing. My soul is at peace, my heart filled with love and hope. I am taking new paths in my career and study and finally becoming the person I want to be.
I cannot thank you you enough my love nor ever explain enough the difference you have made.
Thanks for the comment. I do not think the critique given was deserved, however. You said you had a problem with the last line, "to stand forever one with the broken hearted". It fits, if you read the previous line. "I loved you, and with that, I departed". Basically that line and the last line go to show that the person who got rejected had loved the other person, and then left to stand with the broken-hearted, forever more.