Just wanted to thank you on the comment you left with "Time off". Really do appreciate your thoughts. And you're totally right. It woulda gone right if I went the opposite direction as well, but it wasn't how I felt at the time. Still, Glad that you liked it.
Thank you for your comments on Icy Chill. I chose those subjects for reasons. Red light, because of how much time is wasted there. School yard because at least 13 years of everyone's life is wasted there. Every hour before I have work, I devote that hour to not doing anything but prepping myself for work, it's like I should get paid, and working itself gets in the way of life and hitting the snooze alarm, because those ten minutes could be spent being thankful for/celebrating life.
Hey! I just added another part to "Vampiress", the poem you had commented on. I would really appreciate it if you could go look at it, an comment again. Just tell me if you like the two peices together, and give me any ideas or oppinions you have.