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    Not upset and you're opinion's quite valid. Yes, you didn't suggest that but it seems to me that if you're either going to describe the sex act in pretty poetic words or street slang. There's no in-between. If you want to use street slang that's fine, but a poem like that one should (IMHO) address it in more flowery language.

    Anyway, I didn't mean to come off as though I was upset at you. I wasn't.
    | Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hello... Thank you for the comment.. I really do appreciate it.. And by the way I love your Quote.. I think that's true..

    -medicated
    | Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by medicated - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i don't think i've ever been more insulted than to be compared to a romance novel writer. sheesh! what was i supposed to say - 'she wants him to [censored] her'? most women don't respond to language like that.
    | Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    ooohhh, thank you for your comment, darling!
    It means so much taht someone actually reads these things. heh. Its sort of this attitude liek "well, i'm gonna throw this stuff up and if i get feedback, so be it."
    but then its liek 'well? has anyone commented? come on! hello!" heh. I'm impatient and in need of reinforcement. haha. Anyway thank you for your comment and just for reading it.

    -Layla
    | Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by Dead Weight - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanx 4 that ill look in2 making it a bit better thanx for ur input
    | Posted on 2006-08-26 00:00:00 | by brokenbylove - [ Reply to This ] -



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