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Not upset and you're opinion's quite valid. Yes, you didn't suggest that but it seems to me that if you're either going to describe the sex act in pretty poetic words or street slang. There's no in-between. If you want to use street slang that's fine, but a poem like that one should (IMHO) address it in more flowery language.
Anyway, I didn't mean to come off as though I was upset at you. I wasn't.
i don't think i've ever been more insulted than to be compared to a romance novel writer. sheesh! what was i supposed to say - 'she wants him to [censored] her'? most women don't respond to language like that.
ooohhh, thank you for your comment, darling! It means so much taht someone actually reads these things. heh. Its sort of this attitude liek "well, i'm gonna throw this stuff up and if i get feedback, so be it." but then its liek 'well? has anyone commented? come on! hello!" heh. I'm impatient and in need of reinforcement. haha. Anyway thank you for your comment and just for reading it.