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    Hi, Thank you for your comment and feedback. I used so many quotation marks to indicate longer breaks I suppose, I see how it could be confusing but I wanted to try this; It just felt 'right'.
    The middle part of the poem does seem out of place, I completely agree and think that I am going to take it out all together. I wasn't sure about the ending, that too seemed to be unfitting to the piece, but I like it so I think that I will leave it or rework it.
    Once again thank you for your time and thoughts=]

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    | Posted on 2008-03-28 10:38:32 | by bas - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You really seem to attract all the wierdo's and arseholes on here don't you?

    I think your friend below is a jealous of something, either penile envy on writing alone or just wants you, LarLar????????

    Or he could just be a prick.
    | Posted on 2007-09-21 17:13:31 | by Localfreak - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    this may seem random, but i recognized your name. did you perhaps request a 'larlar' as a friend on myspace?
    | Posted on 2007-08-15 17:58:44 | by freddybuzzkill - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your thoughts on my piece 'In your arms'. I will take your suggestions into consideration.
    ~T.
    | Posted on 2007-02-04 21:34:51 | by Tonya V. - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I just wrote it a few mins ago off the top of my head- I usually like to rhyme and it worked for the first few lines but afterwards I felt that it would be fake if i intentionally rhymed everything and that's not how I felt so i just went with whatever came to mind. So i guess it's a little of both
    | Posted on 2007-02-04 20:23:48 | by Seductress - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment, no matter how juvinile it may have been,
    Thanks again,
    Twice
    | Posted on 2007-01-21 11:57:51 | by Twice - [ Reply to This ] -



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