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Journal: -------------------------------------------Mood: The Usual    there is too much inside of me, i need to release i want to get it all out and just watch myself bleed this need that is there, alone no one cares i feel so ugly ashamed of myself want to run...some place else no way to leave, no where to go no one can help you when you feel this alone ...Created 2013-07-18 01:34:05     [ View Past Journals ] [ View as Blog ]

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| Posted on 2015-01-20 08:29:02 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -

You are not mean enough to take charge Is that good or bad? If you care for yourself just a tiny bit more than you care for your chldren, then you will be more grown-up than they are for a while. But you belong to any man who cares to take charge of you. It's not my fault - your poetry is so good, that means it tells everything. Somebody was bound to comment ....

| Posted on 2013-03-17 18:34:16 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -

Let me start by saying that my first line in that comment was meant facetiously. I didn't really hate your work, quite the contrary, it touched me. I really felt for your inner catty. Tried to encourage you with a discussion of catty prowess. Perhaps it was too abstract of an interpretation but I seriously didn't want it to come across as arrogantly pseudo intellectual. More like playfully encouraging, sort of offer some flea protection against letting words mean more than primal instinct. I agree cats are silent, i rarely hear mine approaching unless it wants to announce itself. I'm into martial arts so I definitely relate having a catty side, sort of a silent hunter. I was hoping to encourage yours and didn't mean to be denigrating or derogatory, more like encourage you to appreciate the personal sanctity of your inner catty. I guess I have to get it, no help. Sometimes my ramblings aren't as clear or succinct as I planed them to be. No offense intended here, really, I swear. After all sometimes words make me wish I had more effective flea control also. I guess all this is meant to say I empathize. Meow! Bruce

| Posted on 2012-04-12 07:15:17 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -

Where have you gone?

| Posted on 2011-08-12 08:18:34 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -

I would just say use punctuation as if you're writing a normal sentence. If you don't like using it, then it's probably better to use too little than too much. I think the best way to improve is looking at what other people write. And it's ok to use no punctuation! All the best, Ben

| Posted on 2011-03-22 18:11:58 | by Civilian - [ Reply to This ] -

It's about one day in my Psych Stats class, my teacher was doing something about smokers, and she asked the class if anyone smoked, and no one raised their hands. Then he asked "how many of you smoke, but are afraid to admit it." and then one girl raised her hand. Then he asked her "why do you smoke?" and then she said I don't know, and started to cry. And then he moved on with class. But it just affected me so much, because I don't think the teacher meant to be a jerk. But the 0 and 5 thing, I thought about it on ANGELO's page, and I figured it's probably because when he was talking about making histograms, he said always used intervals of 5. So that was probably the reason. But thanks for being interested enough to ask!! =] Be well, ~Azura*

| Posted on 2010-10-14 10:50:32 | by EmpathicAya - [ Reply to This ] -

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