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    Journal: Christmas&Hair
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    Mood: Random
      
    I want a puppy for Christmas. Like bad. And I'm thinking about blue hair. Good thing I'm out of high school and my hair doesn't matter!


    ...Created 2008-09-30 22:31:10     [ View Past Journals ]

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     You Broke My iPod
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     I'm Tired of My Face
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     Give Me Time
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    "I'm tired of my face" was also a very good poem, i really loved it, and I don't think that is a over played subject. So many girls out there, are suffering from the feeling of uglieness. Pretty much all of my friends feel that they are fat and ugly, and they are neither, and its painful to watch them torchure them selves. I am glad that your wrote this poem. thank you


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    | Posted on 2008-10-02 23:14:54 | by grimmreaper - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    "you broke my Ipod" was a good poem. I know how it feels to have to hide behind music. Its been my rescue for years now. every time I get down I run to the music. feeling the emotion inside music, some how seems to soothe so much pain inside of us. Any way, I dont know if that is what your poem is about, butit was good. there wasn't a comment box on the poems page, so i had to comment here.

    Grimm reaper
    | Posted on 2008-10-02 23:10:15 | by grimmreaper - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Grand,I just realised Ive been in a bit of a war of words with you and I didnt even know it
    | Posted on 2008-09-30 23:58:43 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    honestly...no,because you titled the poem happy I kind of thought you might be spinning just a little bit of satire,it was cute and funny,but no thats all I got (call me close-minded)

    but in retrospect,since it was written in all seriousness,Id have to say if you were using it as a metaphore its terribly vague,I get the whole hiding away from the world behind the music thing and I see how love has opened up some new doorway and theres the happiness and the new-found freedom and all that,Im reading into things to even get that,but I couldnt take it seriously on my first read,nor did I think I was supposed to...



    | Posted on 2008-09-30 23:39:55 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    its not up to know what went on though,I can only get an impression the poem gives me and then comment on that ,but thats okay I got it wrong then
    | Posted on 2008-09-30 23:20:42 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    meaning?,like as in your attachment to your iPod?I thought you were joking!
    | Posted on 2008-09-30 23:09:37 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -



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