"I'm tired of my face" was also a very good poem, i really loved it, and I don't think that is a over played subject. So many girls out there, are suffering from the feeling of uglieness. Pretty much all of my friends feel that they are fat and ugly, and they are neither, and its painful to watch them torchure them selves. I am glad that your wrote this poem. thank you
"you broke my Ipod" was a good poem. I know how it feels to have to hide behind music. Its been my rescue for years now. every time I get down I run to the music. feeling the emotion inside music, some how seems to soothe so much pain inside of us. Any way, I dont know if that is what your poem is about, butit was good. there wasn't a comment box on the poems page, so i had to comment here.
honestly...no,because you titled the poem happy I kind of thought you might be spinning just a little bit of satire,it was cute and funny,but no thats all I got (call me close-minded)
but in retrospect,since it was written in all seriousness,Id have to say if you were using it as a metaphore its terribly vague,I get the whole hiding away from the world behind the music thing and I see how love has opened up some new doorway and theres the happiness and the new-found freedom and all that,Im reading into things to even get that,but I couldnt take it seriously on my first read,nor did I think I was supposed to...