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thehappyfaeryName: they call me marina when i embody the seas ASL: 20/cloudland. Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 4319 Life Story: [i'm a dinosaur] [ Ignore User ] Favorites: 6 Forum Posts: 3 Shoutbox Posts: 4 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 6354 D 17.41 Years 1.74 |
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semi colon should have been in first sentence, couple of semi colons where none where needed, and some other minor punctuation problems..
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| Posted on 2009-07-17 00:49:56 | by intodesi - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Guess what, the paper I wrote "A Beautiful Woman" i got a 47/48 on it :(
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| Posted on 2009-07-15 19:46:08 | by intodesi - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Yes, I will let you know, I wont get it back until next week, but I think I am happy with it, probably one of the best papers i have ever written. My last paper (the first one for the semester) got me an A, so I am hoping this one will also, because it is much better, in my opinion at least :) Anyways Thanks again
Travis |
| Posted on 2009-07-10 15:21:49 | by intodesi - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Thank you for your wonderful comment, I reposted a final version of it just now, the one I will turn in today. Thanks again for all your thoughts. I hope you enjoy the revised version.
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| Posted on 2009-07-08 13:31:50 | by intodesi - [ Reply to This ] - |
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well now, thank you for your thoughts... a fascinating reply. and truth be known, that was such a lonely poem to write, stuck in a tent, miles away from civilisation... and from her... yup.
thank you. i'll return the favour when i can. |
| Posted on 2009-06-03 22:33:56 | by meoww - [ Reply to This ] - |
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First of all, thanks for commenting on my story
![]() 1. Protector/special. Protecter is a title, thus being a proper noun and not capitalized to emphasize. The way I am, if it's emphasized, the whole word would be capitalized. 2. "The girl". I didn't make a new paragraph to keep a more symetrical look and so it didn't look like I'm giving her more importance then I did... well... "the male"... heh heh heh... not telling his name yet ^_~ ![]() Thats pritty much it. I'm glad you're enjoying my story and I hope you comment on my later chapters as well! And Remember: StAy RaNdOm!!! ~Teh Kix-cha |
| Posted on 2009-06-03 16:53:33 | by Kixur - [ Reply to This ] - |