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    semi colon should have been in first sentence, couple of semi colons where none where needed, and some other minor punctuation problems..
    | Posted on 2009-07-17 00:49:56 | by intodesi - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Guess what, the paper I wrote "A Beautiful Woman" i got a 47/48 on it :(
    | Posted on 2009-07-15 19:46:08 | by intodesi - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Yes, I will let you know, I wont get it back until next week, but I think I am happy with it, probably one of the best papers i have ever written. My last paper (the first one for the semester) got me an A, so I am hoping this one will also, because it is much better, in my opinion at least :) Anyways Thanks again

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    | Posted on 2009-07-10 15:21:49 | by intodesi - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your wonderful comment, I reposted a final version of it just now, the one I will turn in today. Thanks again for all your thoughts. I hope you enjoy the revised version.
    | Posted on 2009-07-08 13:31:50 | by intodesi - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    well now, thank you for your thoughts... a fascinating reply. and truth be known, that was such a lonely poem to write, stuck in a tent, miles away from civilisation... and from her... yup.

    thank you.
    i'll return the favour when i can.
    | Posted on 2009-06-03 22:33:56 | by meoww - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    First of all, thanks for commenting on my story I did some editing (most mistakes were do to speed-typing and unmarked grammer checks) so it should be alittle better now. However some things I did NOT change and why.

    1. Protector/special. Protecter is a title, thus being a proper noun and not capitalized to emphasize. The way I am, if it's emphasized, the whole word would be capitalized.

    2. "The girl". I didn't make a new paragraph to keep a more symetrical look and so it didn't look like I'm giving her more importance then I did... well... "the male"... heh heh heh... not telling his name yet ^_~

    Thats pritty much it. I'm glad you're enjoying my story and I hope you comment on my later chapters as well!

    And Remember: StAy RaNdOm!!!

    ~Teh Kix-cha
    | Posted on 2009-06-03 16:53:33 | by Kixur - [ Reply to This ] -



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