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Yes, I will let you know, I wont get it back until next week, but I think I am happy with it, probably one of the best papers i have ever written. My last paper (the first one for the semester) got me an A, so I am hoping this one will also, because it is much better, in my opinion at least :) Anyways Thanks again
First of all, thanks for commenting on my story I did some editing (most mistakes were do to speed-typing and unmarked grammer checks) so it should be alittle better now. However some things I did NOT change and why.
1. Protector/special. Protecter is a title, thus being a proper noun and not capitalized to emphasize. The way I am, if it's emphasized, the whole word would be capitalized.
2. "The girl". I didn't make a new paragraph to keep a more symetrical look and so it didn't look like I'm giving her more importance then I did... well... "the male"... heh heh heh... not telling his name yet ^_~
Thats pritty much it. I'm glad you're enjoying my story and I hope you comment on my later chapters as well!