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    Mood: The Usual
      
    Sometime when I was younger. I lost who I was and maybe even what i stood for.
    could it be, I lost my mind, I never could figure this out.

    It's been a struggle and I feel the pain Everyday. Praying for a change for my momma case. I tell her I'm never going to give up, but in reality sometimes your all is not enough.

    My struggle has been my motivation. my motivation has created this hustle. But a hustle wont prepare you. Too tell your kid wipe those tears. There is nothing to fear, nothing promised tomorrow.

    Through out everything I'm still lost, no path to choose from. I'm stuck with the question who am I, am I worth living while walking around emotionless, feeling as if I'm soulless.


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    Thanks for your critique on Quiet Hour. I was trying to do something different with the rhythm, it actually goes two lines of 6 syllables and one of 10. It works well in my head, but maybe I'm wrong.. I can try to make those three lines of 10 syllables shorter. Do you have any suggestions? Thanks!
    | Posted on 2007-07-31 17:22:57 | by silverfragment - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    What does that mean my love?
    | Posted on 2007-07-03 15:38:07 | by Jessica Lynn - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    But you look like that dood who played Jesus in the Passion.

    What was his name?

    Joe Checklasaniaslovakion or something like that.

    (That was a compliment)

    MyX
    | Posted on 2007-06-24 16:04:43 | by MyX - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You should consider changing your name.

    Theman...it sounds like a gay guy saying 'semen'.


    Not sure that is what you were going for.


    MyX
    | Posted on 2007-06-24 16:02:30 | by MyX - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i just love you sooooooo much!! erga. im so lucky to have you!
    | Posted on 2007-06-20 13:17:20 | by Jessica Lynn - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    what is wrong my love?
    | Posted on 2007-06-07 17:12:32 | by Jessica Lynn - [ Reply to This ] -



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