LOL thanks so much for your comment on "'chocolate' is thicker than water". I guess it is a TAD melodramatic, but i was kind of going for the feel of it, you know, pouring, drops spilling gradually from the sky.
Hey thank you for the comment on my recent poem, I had trouble understanding what style makes the poem a bit boring, I think you met the repition at the end. And I really apprechiate that you told me about that, I'm trying to gain as much constructive critisim on my poetry, because I want to progress more in writting. So thank you very much for that. I'll keep the repition in mind as well as building on an original idea of mine thank you.