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Favorites: 4 Forum Posts: 1 Shoutbox Posts: 1 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 5909 D 16.19 Years 1.62 Decades 196.97 Months 844.14 Weeks 5.909000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: You see things; and you say, 'Why?' But I dream things that never were; and I say, "Why not?" George Bernard Shaw
Thank you for your comments on September, and Where the sinner lay. I appirciate your thoughts, and would just like to add that in September theres a bit more then waiting that I'm trying to convey, but yea I think if I do ever revise it I will cut some of the lines chanting waiting for September, thanks again.
my writing "iaida" is actually a track on my solo album(Busd od Ecrin) Iaida means "most high" and this basically goes along with the storyline of my cd....its just not making sense unless you heard it along with the album in its entirety...
while "dead" would take on a very emotional and sad story line...it would emerge as a spectacle of dispair and truth.....the story is all there...the qustions arise though....why is there shame?....what has this person really otten from their father in life?...should the father go to heavan based upon the persons witness of how great of bad a man he is?....there is a definite interaction here between writer, characters, reader....an interaction that can be very well recieved.....make them feel what you feel...thats what I do...as you might have caught on from reading my poems, i feel alot of darkness...so do my readers.