Thanks for comments on Tiji. I changed the "@" word you didn't like! It was meant to be funny but failed. This is funny about trying to be funny: I'm finding that a funny idea isn't so cute unless you give it without funny language. The more straightforward and boring I make the verse, the funnier people find Tiji! Is that reverse psychology or something??
I agree with your journal entry! Me too, I like it and appreciate the intelligence and sincerity of everybody and the fun of commenting and getting commented on! It is so different from my real world where people are random, distracted and hard to get on with, even whenever they happen to be nearly sane. I guess writers must be perfect, or something??
about your poem don't...it was ok. however, i felt like everything you said had already been said before. there was nothing really new. maybe it is just me. it just seemed kind of...unsatisfying. like there could have been another layer.
maybe thats all you had to say. i dunno. it's your poem though mate, so you can ignore me completely.