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    Name: Nick Moore
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    Journal: More good music
    Mood: Relaxing
    Different mood entirely for the music I'm talking about this time. A little darker.

    The Gallery - Dark Tranquillity (yes the two Ls are intentional)

    Come and dance through my vanity's halls
    Welcome to my exhibition

    Ornaments fall
    The fate of my art, condemned
    And the creative seed
    That grows to the tune of the harvest song
    Embody my lifelong passion
    Intertwine with the structures of my art
    Those empty frames staring at me

    One lonely portrait covers the lovestarved canvas
    In honour of the birthless rebellion within me

    Every picture holds a tale
    Every shade tells of a thousand words

    The artistry of living chaos
    Is pictured in the poets tears
    Because everything burns
    The final concept
    Is all but a thought away

    Be gone, you foul enchantress of decay!
    My thoughts and words will come to right
    In my chamber where chaos conveys
    Kneel down to my desire

    Deep in the vaults of my carnal agony
    Emptiness! Orchestration through colours

    The gallery

    To never return to my guidance
    Burning my art


    Dragged Across a Forest Floor - Woods of Ypres

    Another era has come to an end
    You'll return to where it began
    Wandering at night on Ypres Rd.
    To determine why you walk in the woods alone

    A piece of out history I used to honour
    They disrespected and disgraced
    They took the ground upon which I walked
    And rubbed it in my face

    To me these woods are but a forest of metaphors
    And nothing more
    A path through the woods of my past
    Where I was dragged across a forest floor

    They breathe in the stagnant air
    The poison sky shelters them from the sun
    No exposure, nothing grows
    No one ever wonders what lies beyond

    So set in their old ways
    They could only hope for change
    Instead they flaunt their stubborn pride
    Digging their own graves

    To me these woods are but a forest of metaphors
    And nothing more
    A path through the woods of my past
    Where I was dragged across a forest floor

    I see the truth hidden between the trees
    These tough woods are but delicate forest
    Everyone for themselves in the hallowed name of unity

    Finding comfort in their misery
    They were doomed beyond the reach of help
    Saved only by the unconditional love
    Of hate for a place they couldn't live without

    All that I hoped to change
    Would not be reversed by words alone
    It would require all of their efforts
    The lack of which was already set in stone

    At a time when I could take no more
    I was dragged across a forest floor

    Sticks and stones
    The combined discomfort of hundreds of pains
    Thorns and Needles
    I pull them out of my skin
    While walking home

    Accept the fact that they've missed your point
    Conceal your motives and all your thoughts
    Keep your opinions to yourself
    Give them exactly what they want

    There's no hope for understanding
    Our differences would not be solved
    For my survival and my sanity
    In time I learned to have tolerance for you all

    Bite your tongue until it bleeds
    Choke down the blood so no one sees
    Fight the tears
    Let them fall within
    While you're here
    Never let your weakness show

    These woods are full of hope
    These woods are where I walk alone

    Even at times
    When standing still
    Strength and speed
    Still lie dormant within
    You will see me channel the pain
    As blood leaves my core and fills my veins

    These woods are but a forest of metaphors
    And nothing more

    The tall trees above
    They are the ones that exist
    The fallen leaves are those that have fallen to my feet
    The trails of broken branches
    These are the mistakes you make
    The seeds are the ones to be that I push in the earth
    With every step I take


    My Lost Lenore - Tristania

    For thy promise bewailed
    By her raveneyes
    By her beauty and a scarlet sunrise
    May thy river bury her silvertears
    A fallen angel... enshrined in moonlit seas

    Leaving vitality
    So serene breeds my darkness
    Entreating winterwinds
    Though I leave... I embrace thee

    Conceal thy precious angellore
    I secrete my soul
    Under thy wings of sorrow
    Dark I embrace thy eyes
    Wander lost on life's narrow path
    I reveal my heart
    To this beauty dressed in dark

    [whispering:] When my shadows devotedly cast
    My moon will rise with lost

    Grieving raveneyes
    Falls asleep with the sunrise
    Delightful midsummer breeze
    Though I leave... I await thee

    Conceal thy precious angellore
    I secrete my soul
    Under thy wings of sorrow
    Dark, I embrace thy eyes
    Wander lost on life's narrow path
    I reveal my heart
    To this beauty dressed in dark

    Grant me thy last midsummer breeze
    May thou ascend from endless sleep
    ... my desire
    Dance me above thy moonlit seas
    Glance yearningly into the deep
    A cold and weary night

    Descending me like flakes of snow
    I embrace the cold
    For a life that morrows
    Dark I embrace thy heart
    Wanderer lost beyond veils of dawn
    I conceal thy loss
    Enthralled in life yet still I mourn
    My lost Lenore...

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    Hah! I'm finally back. Not quite sure if you remember me, but I've finally found my user name. Eager to check out your new stuff, and some of my own. How've you been?!
    | Posted on 2008-01-07 22:38:32 | by losing_focus - [ Reply to This ] -
    Great journal entry. Love the song lyrics.
    | Posted on 2006-11-18 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine - [ Reply to This ] -
    Hey thanks for the comment...and i was just thinking of society and how stupid people can be...you should read my I Can't Take This or This PAin(taje the knife away)...i have wuite a few good ones ...or so ppl tell me but thnx for your comment it means alot and i hope im writing in a few years

    | Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by panzyrocker - [ Reply to This ] -
    Much thanks. Do feel free to take a peek at my older works.
    | Posted on 2006-11-15 00:00:00 | by Lacrimosa - [ Reply to This ] -
    Because you're an amazing poet, if you wrote more and really put yourself into it (and i saw what you can do) I bet my favourites list would not be any different.
    | Posted on 2006-11-14 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine - [ Reply to This ] -
    I sure do repeat myself but again, I thank you from all my miswritten heart.
    | Posted on 2006-11-14 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine - [ Reply to This ] -

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