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    So good to have that input! I was toying with a parenthetical statement to give the reader an option of interpretation & feel. Thanks for confirming that. You are most appreciated for your time & valued assessment. Cheers (on Life is a Cuppa)
    | Posted on 2013-01-13 22:27:26 | by CrypticBard - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your words on rats.

    I may have used it wrong but "how will I be made to lay?" is synonymous with "how will I be put to rest"

    I'm using lay as to the placement of the body when I die. I'm not sure, but should that be lay or lie?
    | Posted on 2013-01-13 16:31:43 | by Silenced Hope - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Re: Catalyst

    Thanks, you're so correct, I fixed it!!! Glad you liked it.

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