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    TO ALL THOSE WHO I WAS SUPPOSED TO REVIEW - MY BLACKLIGHT DIED ON YM LAPTOP AND I AM WRITING THIS FROM MY AUNT'S PC. I'LL TRY TO GIVE A SOLID CRITIQUE WHEN I CAN.

    My sincere apologies.


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    thanks!
    | Posted on 2012-06-30 16:52:03 | by lukewarm - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you for the comments on "Interim"

    they are much appreciated...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-11-12 10:33:24 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    that doesn't mean that you have to revise it...and i didn't miss the point...because i did get something from it...the poet usually has a reason for writing a piece..but i think it is good if poets allow readers to relate to a poem in the way they do...if a poem is written so that it appeals in some way to each reader, it is successful.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-10-31 20:44:17 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i went back in 1986...had my undergrad in 1972....and i still can't believe i made it through...been teaching 20 years with it now...but still..i look back and feel really lucky i survived....my natural inclination is not being a scholar. lol

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-22 22:37:48 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    oh no...are you like me?

    i never vacation well....always feel guilty if i am not busy teaching or working...never good at it.

    wish you could relax....

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-17 19:33:09 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    appreciate the thoughts on "irene's twin"

    the title i do want because this is a timely piece, although a metaphor using the storm, this is the particular storm it sprang from...and it is a way to remember this storm...sort of like the inland hurricane we had here in southern illinois two years ago..

    i usually go for a more universal theme, but when certain events happen...the i tend to write something that has to do with them...

    but i will take that suggestion along with all of your others into consideration...

    and i appreciate the time you took to look at my piece...

    thank you.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-04 17:57:44 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -



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