--Elite Writer Alias: tjsmith5 Name: Ole Miss Rebel ASL: 28/m/MS Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 174 Life Story: Epic saga. [ Ignore User ]
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TO ALL THOSE WHO I WAS SUPPOSED TO REVIEW - MY BLACKLIGHT DIED ON YM LAPTOP AND I AM WRITING THIS FROM MY AUNT'S PC. I'LL TRY TO GIVE A SOLID CRITIQUE WHEN I CAN.
that doesn't mean that you have to revise it...and i didn't miss the point...because i did get something from it...the poet usually has a reason for writing a piece..but i think it is good if poets allow readers to relate to a poem in the way they do...if a poem is written so that it appeals in some way to each reader, it is successful.
i went back in 1986...had my undergrad in 1972....and i still can't believe i made it through...been teaching 20 years with it now...but still..i look back and feel really lucky i survived....my natural inclination is not being a scholar. lol
the title i do want because this is a timely piece, although a metaphor using the storm, this is the particular storm it sprang from...and it is a way to remember this storm...sort of like the inland hurricane we had here in southern illinois two years ago..
i usually go for a more universal theme, but when certain events happen...the i tend to write something that has to do with them...
but i will take that suggestion along with all of your others into consideration...
and i appreciate the time you took to look at my piece...
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