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    your welcome
    | Posted on 2010-12-10 20:17:19 | by scardnscared - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Yes I am here to leave a comment about "I need to know" very honest and expressive piece.I thought it gave me a real good insight on what ppl who are frustrated and burnt out on someone they are in a relationship with want to write that (If they are writers, that is) it also gave a inside look on how a women feels about a mans mishaps, mistakes, failed attempts to work things out and more bad memories than good.Anyways, nice and very well put together with the alternative key logs too, it's becoming very somewhat popular here.But I did look at it another way and that was to me the poem should be extra special for you bc it has the ability to answer or already have the question of the future based on the second person in the piece.Says that the woman is hurt but even more confused by the illusions and false promises or lies of love within two ppl who are intimate so I think it's a very nice portion of "poetic graffitti" that is a vent, that can relate and be identified by readers who may have just become in the exact same situation and feelings.Very well done.

    Sloan....
    | Posted on 2010-12-10 18:20:10 | by RASloan - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    if anybody has any help or comments please feel free to leave them. i would love to hear from everybody....thanks
    | Posted on 2010-12-09 14:10:01 | by tobyallen92 - [ Reply to This ] -



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