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    Hey, thanks a lot for the comments.

    I really agree with you about the comments about rhyme in Before You End The Search but it was a case of not wanting to cut things simply because I wanted it in there, rather than the good of the poem. I've revised it now and only made a few changes but I think they improve the poem tenfold, so thanks a lot for the honest crit. It's a bit too rare around here sometimes.

    And I'm glad you liked Ponderings.... I think the fact that the other was the first thing I'd written in a while and this was the second meant I'd loosened up a little and wrote more naturally. I'm not sure if I could make it more specific. I am working on some revisions though so we'll see what comes from that. I do agree though that a more specific character tends to invite more involvement from the reader/audience, I'm just not too sure I could bring myself to it. We'll see anyways...

    Well, thanks again
    | Posted on 2008-03-11 18:46:06 | by Predator - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey hey, thanks muchly for the kind words and suggestions. i do preciate it.
    | Posted on 2008-01-24 20:16:30 | by eno1 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment on my poem. It means a lot. I'm glad you liked it.

    Happy New Year
    | Posted on 2008-01-01 13:38:59 | by The lost child - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Heyy... Thx for your comment on < Just Missing You>... It really means alot.. Cz I guess till now you're the only one who got it right ... Or even thought it CAn actually happen !!
    I guess people can sometimes be too superficial to get in such details... Well Thx again :!!
    | Posted on 2007-12-10 06:57:49 | by Dying Young - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey there; thank you for commenting on Very Nice Boobs. Nothing like putting truth to rhythm to induce chuckles. The more life sucks, the funnier it is.

    Boobage.

    Happy holidays yourself.

    Jen
    | Posted on 2007-12-09 17:40:20 | by Jeniffer - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey thanx for your comment on letters and for your random comment about cmments...
    im about to go and make a blanket fort in the living room and have a sleep overwith my little sister so i will come by another time real son and check out your suff
    | Posted on 2007-11-23 02:25:58 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -



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