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    Journal: Sonnets?
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    Mood: Sonnets.
      
    Yes definitely, sonnets.


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    Oh yeah, I didn't win anything. Oh well didn't really expect too anyway
    | Posted on 2010-10-30 02:07:48 | by nicodemous - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for stopping by and commenting. On "Tear Asunder" the lines about leaving the world in darkness, so I will never be alone are more metaphoric. So I will not be alone in my darkness kind of thing. Not literally the loss of light, but the darkness within, which tends to grow in chaos. However, it can’t be a very good line/poem if it needs explaining, which I already knew it was kind of subpar. I just wanted to do something simple in the moment and that is what came out. Not my worse effort, but not really a worthy one either…
    | Posted on 2010-10-30 02:03:24 | by nicodemous - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment on "At Ease"
    I think confused is actually a really good word to describe the piece. It's like a mind 'phase' of someone/me wondering what their friends mean to them... or a mum looking at her kids wondering where they will go in their future. Depends on how you interpret it.
    But thank you so very much, I will work on making things more clear. :]
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    | Posted on 2010-10-28 02:52:50 | by EshyFishy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your compliments on Warmth! I do not deserve them.
    | Posted on 2010-10-27 21:21:08 | by saartha - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You may if you like. That disclaimer stops most of the riff-raff I can't be bothered with on here... so elitist of me, I know. Ha.
    | Posted on 2010-10-24 18:42:35 | by trinityfinger - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Also, I wrote 'ravaging crow' without any boundaries in mind. I subscribe to free form most of the time, and that's what that piece is.
    | Posted on 2010-10-24 15:23:32 | by AsiaticFox - [ Reply to This ] -



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