--Elite Writer Alias: wonderbread1000 Name: tony christensen ASL: 22 / male / ... Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 4037 Life Story: finally in love [ Ignore User ]
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thanks for commenting on my poem No more laments. I agree with you that the word heart was too obvious. It's ironic that the Firehorsie always criticized my writings saying that I had to point this out & I was too, vague. I'm wondering if you know how to strike a balance from too obvious of too metaphorical/vague? I am simply curious, because I've been on both sides of the coin. I will now read something of yours & try to give a decent critique. pioneerheart
thanks for the comment on "my poetic demise" i liked where you took this piece...perhaps some of it's meaning was hidden even from me, because once i read your comment i was like...yeah, that's what i was trying to say, that's what i meant.
as for the capitalization of T and E...i was going for like...the actual words The End. like at the end of a book there's the last page with nothing on it except
i don't know if that makes sense...but...that's what i was going for anyway.
Hey wonderbread? Thanks for the comment on true love's form. I am encouraged it means something to you coz it means a lot to me.i was thinking alot about that particular subject and came up with that poem. God bless. Joel