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    | Posted on 2008-06-16 23:42:17 | by diamondmind - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hi, wonderbread (haha)
    (the title is referring to the fact that i wrote that in quick, blind response to someone else's poem... someone was bugging me to post, and it's all i really wanted to share.)

    yep.

    thanks for reading
    | Posted on 2008-06-16 22:58:01 | by diamondmind - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for commenting on my poem No more laments. I agree with you that the word heart was too obvious. It's ironic that the Firehorsie always criticized my writings saying that I had to point this out & I was too, vague. I'm wondering if you know how to strike a balance from too obvious of too metaphorical/vague? I am simply curious, because I've been on both sides of the coin. I will now read something of yours & try to give a decent critique. pioneerheart
    | Posted on 2008-06-10 21:17:19 | by pioneerheart - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the comment on "my poetic demise" i liked where you took this piece...perhaps some of it's meaning was hidden even from me, because once i read your comment i was like...yeah, that's what i was trying to say, that's what i meant.
    as for the capitalization of T and E...i was going for like...the actual words The End. like at the end of a book there's the last page with nothing on it except

    The End.

    i don't know if that makes sense...but...that's what i was going for anyway.
    | Posted on 2008-04-18 19:00:58 | by was_i_ever_real - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment on 'Rhyming Days.' I was actually very worried it would be too cliché to be enjoyable, but it sounds like some people like it regardless of my own opinion Thanks again!
    | Posted on 2008-04-17 23:37:10 | by saartha - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey wonderbread? Thanks for the comment on true love's form. I am encouraged it means something to you coz it means a lot to me.i was thinking alot about that particular subject and came up with that poem. God bless. Joel
    | Posted on 2008-04-17 07:11:21 | by nevender - [ Reply to This ] -



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