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    Chronicles of Jim: Prologue


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    Featured: Chronicles of Jim: Prologue

     Redemption (A Sci Fi, not an emo poem)
    :|| V: 537 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Prose :
     Requiem to an Adulterer
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    ::Love : Class : Story :
     Endless For
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    ::Comedy : Class : Story :
     My Reflective Essay
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    ::Misc : Class : Deep Thought :
     Chronos Passages 3 & 4
    :|| V: 618 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Legend : Class : Story :
     Chronos Passages 1 & 2
    :|| V: 631 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Legend : Class : Story :
     A Future without a Past
    :|| V: 675 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Legend : Class : Story :
     Family Love.
    :|| V: 771 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     Chronicles of Jim Ch4
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    ::Misc : Class : Story :
     The Emo Poem Part 2
    :|| V: 818 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Cutting or Mutilation : Class : Poetry :
     Featured workChronicles of Jim: Prologue
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    ::Vampire : Class : Story :
     Chronicles of Jim Ch3
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    ::Dark : Class : Story :
     Chronicles of Jim Ch2
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    ::Dark : Class : Story :
     Chronicles of Jim Ch1
    :|| V: 615 | C: 0 ||:
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     No night is a good night
    :|| V: 883 | C: 5 ||:
    ::Dark : Class : Story :
     The Emo Poem
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     Judgement
    :|| V: 852 | C: 9 ||:
    ::Religious : Class : Rant :
     Sin
    :|| V: 896 | C: 9 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Random Thoughts :
     Submission Blues
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    ::Angry : Class : Rant :
     Just Another Day Part 3
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    Thanks for your nice comments on FADSCAPES. I'm sorry that I confused you with the non in quotes word, rain. I've edited by putting "rain", which means circumstances.
    | Posted on 2009-01-07 04:19:27 | by realpoet - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Not everything can be handed on a silver platter.
    | Posted on 2009-01-06 06:08:00 | by trouble - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    yeppers, just a random sling of words in ryme. more just boredom and mechanisms w/e. thanks for commenting.
    | Posted on 2009-01-06 05:35:10 | by cornonthekob - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your comment on "Temporal Fluidity", it reminds me how difficult most people find it to keep up with my writing.

    I agree I need to work on context and description... but I disagree as to the flashbacks, around which the story was built.

    Thanks anyway.
    ~ La Muse d'Azur
    | Posted on 2007-10-09 22:25:24 | by Azuire - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    It's just because its there and people "surf" the writings. I know I do it. THey look at it, decide they don't wanna read it..or read it and don't comment, and move on.

    it counts every time it's opened.

    | Posted on 2007-10-04 01:01:56 | by Maki - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I enjoyed your comment on "Inevitability".

    I'm not sure if you realized this, but I never mentioned that it was about my parents...quite frankly because it's not. Yes, it is about the future, but it's also a lot more than that.

    It could have been the way that I wrote it (or actually didn't) that it wasn't obvious...but there really was more depth than you give it credit for.

    Resolutions don't have to be made...conflict doesn't have to end. but that's besides the point.

    I appreciate your comment on my poem, really, I just think that theres than its face value.

    Part of that will show once I take the time to edit and rewrite the piece.

    Thanks again.

    -Sandi
    | Posted on 2007-10-03 21:53:48 | by Dimension_X - [ Reply to This ] -



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