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Thanks so much for reading and commenting on 'Paisley'. Yeah, there are probably some erratic rhythms in there, but I don't really notice them when I read it. I dwell in freeform because it enables you to share words and feelings more than poetry or rhythm. Not that I'm saying that rhythm isn't important, but sometimes it needs to be sacrificed for the sake of the words involved.

Again, I appreciate your thoughts on it, and I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

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With Be a Bird you hit the nail on the head. The parts that seemed weak and lost were describing that kind of confusion that one might get being sliced into several planes or realities. And the end was urging the feeling to stop trying to hold onto logic and sense to stand on. Whispering to let go.

Thanks so much for taking time to consider my piece.
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