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    Journal: !Drowning!
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    Mood: Stop kissing my feet!
      
    Where is this heading? I thought I had the right map but, apparently there were mistakes.

    What is this?

    How can someone sit upon a throne that they had no idea they had?

    Waiting just seems so....frustrating. It feels as if I have been patient long eneough.

    Finding the answers only to have more questions.

    I worked so hard at dissapearing into the background but....I still stood out. This is what was meant but, it is so hard to keep it under controll.

    Somehow I can use this to my advantage but, how can I help all of thier disapointment?


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    I see what you mean. I'll fix it.
    | Posted on 2009-10-24 16:26:06 | by lovedeathsdeath - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I wrote another one... Just to let you know.
    | Posted on 2009-10-13 17:46:48 | by lovedeathsdeath - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank-you so much for the comment. :3 Even if you were out of time. It pleases me to see that someone else was touched by my writing.

    -Eyamma
    | Posted on 2009-09-09 20:23:54 | by Eyamma - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks mucho for the comment glad ya found it quite interesting.
    | Posted on 2009-06-21 00:58:23 | by cornonthekob - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for commenting on 'A Portrait'. With my knowledge of German being non-existent, I had to look up 'Ich liebe. Recht ausgewogen auf eine Art und Weise.' on babelfish, only to find that it pretty much echoed your sentiments in English!

    It's funny that you should suggest leaving the final three lines because they provide a sense of completion, because that's exactly the reason I think they shouldn't be there. They do provide a sense of completion, but one which is false- my time with this person was cut off before it could reach such a stage.

    I think that 'truncating' the poem by leaving them out would capture that better than a neat ending. I'll leave it out there for a little longer, in any case.

    Cheers again for the comments, and I'll look at your page now.

    All the best,
    Ben
    | Posted on 2009-06-17 04:42:52 | by Civilian - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey there. thanks for the wows on blame it on spring.

    much appreciated.
    | Posted on 2009-03-13 03:25:13 | by isabella - [ Reply to This ] -



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