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    Just a re-read of your comment on Emperor... The last stanza is a sort of back to reality thing... I fixed it up a bit.

    The amount of words in the piece equates the amount of syllables outside the quotation marks. Why? The hell do I know. Verses with say 7,7 syllables can be read separately and hold their own meaning (this works for multiples aswell.. like 7,14) I went crazy one night and just wrote like a mad man on a piece of paper... sort of added form to it a bit and posted. But what's done is done right?

    Just thoughts I'd figure I'd share.. you don't have to respond..

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    | Posted on 2007-09-09 20:43:24 | by Outlaw - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    bertrand russell and david hume,
    you told me I should read up on those two... I kind of mapped them out yesterday and found them a bit... random. Any peculiar reason why you mentioned them?
    | Posted on 2007-09-07 15:58:05 | by Outlaw - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I'm curious... out of all the names.. why'd you give me those two?
    | Posted on 2007-09-06 20:04:15 | by Outlaw - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Sounds promising. :)
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    What happened earlier ?
    | Posted on 2007-08-27 00:09:36 | by Outlaw - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    LOL, here's me thinking the big fat NIKON made it apparent...
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