Just a re-read of your comment on Emperor... The last stanza is a sort of back to reality thing... I fixed it up a bit.
The amount of words in the piece equates the amount of syllables outside the quotation marks. Why? The hell do I know. Verses with say 7,7 syllables can be read separately and hold their own meaning (this works for multiples aswell.. like 7,14) I went crazy one night and just wrote like a mad man on a piece of paper... sort of added form to it a bit and posted. But what's done is done right?
Just thoughts I'd figure I'd share.. you don't have to respond..