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    i haven't been on in a while. my bad. i'm going to try to start posting again. i just haven't found the time


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    Thanks for the comment on Born To Conquer. I actually wrote it about noone in particular. It just kinda came to me. Peace!!!
    Katana
    | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Well, I can't help thinking that your ''poetry'' should not be listed under poetry but under the ''good potential hip hop song''. That's how your poems look like. Like hip hop stuff. I'm not saying they aren't good, I'm saying you picked the wrong genre to put them in. On one hand you're right, many people in here think themselves to be poets but actually write junk. On the other hand, some of them really have a talent. In definition, poetry is the art of beautiful words, rythm, rhyme or the simple expression through free verse in the form of stanzas. Your poem 'At it again', doen't fit in that definition.
    | Posted on 2006-09-16 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks bout your comment but I have one question are your submissions all like flow style or do they come off that way well later
    | Posted on 2006-09-01 00:00:00 | by Dutchess_aira - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Both verses were ill. I've just grown to a point where I am tired of hearing this garbage. You know what I'm sayin? If they are going to speak....especially behind a mic.....why not make it something to TRULY listen to. Why has hip hop just become a tight beat and a whack hook?

    *shrugs*

    For your age....you are doing big things. Believe me.

    And....that's too funny about Troy.....to think I thought that he hated me.

    I am a cool white girl though! I may be white....but I have flavor.

    Much love,

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2006-09-01 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the fav's addition. Forgot to say that the first time.
    | Posted on 2006-09-01 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Shoot....I listen to Common as well! LMAO!

    I'm tired of the club music. You can only listen to it so much. OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN.

    I'm straight with Lil Wayne. He has some good lyrics. All these other cats....nah....a good beat can only take you so far.
    | Posted on 2006-09-05 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 - [ Reply to This ] -



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