This generally categorizes most amateur writes.

Freeverse first person poetry either picking an abstract concept like love, hate, death, and pain or directly talking to some entity they have emotional conflict with about breaking up, missing them, hating them, or asking why they did 'that'. They spoon feed the reader their emotions. "I'm hurting inside". If any type of rhetoric is used, it's cliches, rhetorical questions, and bad metaphors. (e.x. My brain is on acid. Life is like a dream. I could never live without you. I'm missing you. I'll pray for you. Please come back. You're as cold as winter. etc.). There is plenty of ways of sayins I'm hurting inside besides directly saying it.

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