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RIPPING THE FLESH OFF MY SKIN
I took the cold blade against my wrists
Raping my EAR with the sound!!!!
F*** A****** I WILL KILL YOU
My Black and yellow guts oozing out like a slug
I tear runs down my face
The world to ourselves
2 birds with one stone
I wish, I want, us, we...
Never use 'you' in your writing
It's okay to write in first person. Try not using it to develop style.
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