"Just one drop
that's all i need"
you said it before
...always me
but i dont mind
the cold blade
just because these
scars were made
...by you.....
Just the sweet sillence
and you and me
i just wish
that i could be
more than what i am
...a little like you...
I'm too afraid
to change my ways
it's a little more
that what i know
but why simply be
what i've always been
i've learned before
and so i'll begin
...to be like you...
But once i start
i'm not satisfied
with what amount
is satisfied
i need more
than you want to give
but i want...
to live...
more.....
Wow man , that’s a flipping awesome poem , I like it so much , specially the part when you said that you’re ready to suffer just for her :
but i dont mind the cold blade just because these scars were made ...by you.....
Cool poem , I didn’t know vamp poerty can be like that , i can't seem to think of anything bad to say of this . great job , i'm adding it to my favorites
Wow I loved this one, I've been into vamp writes alot lately and actually just wrote one but its not as good as this one, your almost melodrama here really added to the effect. Your imagry was just about perfect, there really isn't anything that I would change here.
"but i dont mind the cold blade just because these scars were made ...by you....." this had to my favorite part but it was all awesome. so yah lol great write, I'll check out sum of ur other ones then, take care, -jess
I liked this very much. It had a dramatic feel and seeting frustration underneath it. I loved the wording and thought you did well with your flow and imagery. I enjoyed this very mcuh. Great work!
Submission Name: Blood Lust
