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For Those Who Voted For Bush


Author: sravenlyn
ASL Info:    17/f/NJ
Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 21 /58 /67
Words: 294
Class/Type: Poetry /Political
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Hey have fun with reading this piece of poo on a stick lol. I hate this peom cuz its not my best work but i love this poem cuz it shits on Bush. Ty for reading it ppl.


For Those Who Voted For Bush



For those who voted for Buah
Stop what your doing... Shush!
Let me ask you a question...
This is something I've always mentioned...
Do you have something over seas?
Then listen to me please!
If you wanted them back home to stay
Then why did you vote anyway
You had a choice
And you still have a voice
If you would have waited for our soilders
Bush wouldnt be claiming he has us on his shoulders
When he goes to hell
We are all going as well!
So I say lets go back and revote
Make Bush take a note
We will no longer take your crap
And then still have to listen to this and that!
We wont let you fill our heads with lies
And still everynight have cries as a soilder dies!
This is for you
Soilders have lives too
Thety have lives
Some have kids, some have wives
As mommy tells the kids lies
Daddy shoots, gets shoot, and dies!
For those who voted for Bush
Stop what your doing... Shush!
As our soilders are fighting over seas
Stop what your doing and bring them home please!
So the some taht have lives
Those that have kids, and those that have wives
Dont have to have mommy tell the kids lies
And daddy wont have to shoot, get shot, or die
That way
We know their all okay
No more backing down
We are now taking Bush to town
We are nor free rollers
As well as free pollers
So if you want to be Bush's door mate
Be my guest cause I'd rather be a sly cat
No more Bush
No more people being shushed
No more lies
No more cries
No more lonely wives
No more soilder dies!




Submitted on 2006-04-22 20:22:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I felt like this was a little more along the lines of a rant than a poem, but the points you brought up are very valid and I happen to agree with most of them. If I were of legal age to vote (I will be in 2 months yay), I would have never voted for Bush. I really don't understand why so many people did. He's caused more trouble during his presidency than anything else. Good write... interesting to think about.
| Posted on 2006-04-23 00:00:00 | by Cai | [ Reply to This ]


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