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    dots Submission Name: ''DANGEROUS EXTRAORDNARYS''dots
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    Author: ms.v
    Elite Ratio:    6.72 - 109/24/20
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       by:ms.v 6/25/03


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    dots''DANGEROUS EXTRAORDNARYS''dots
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    Dangerous extraordinary
    Beauty's noble salt
    gives reservations to
    the god of love's depictions
    physical agents escorts Cupid's plot
    challenged Cupid's talents
    seduced Beauty's restraint
    passion of the second nature
    abandoned Love's arrow
    and found there way
    Beauty need not look
    for love no more
    and Love
    need not look
    for Beauty.




    Submitted on 2006-04-23 07:51:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      deep da seductions surreal. grt job on ths [censored] luv it absoultuly luv it. the god of love's depictions
    physical angents escorts Cupid's plot. I luv this line. reminds me of a deception of luv.
    | Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by darksuicide | [ Reply to This ]
      Pretty cool. It's so vocabulary challenged, I might add. :)
    | Posted on 2006-05-09 00:00:00 | by D-Ink | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this.
    yeah, the grammer was a little iffy.
    But it's so beautifuly written.
    And thanks for the comment =]
    | Posted on 2006-07-03 00:00:00 | by Xx_bang_bang_ | [ Reply to This ]


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