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    dots Submission Name: ''ETERNITY'S AGENT''dots
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    Author: ms.v
    Elite Ratio:    6.72 - 109/24/20
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Description:
       by:ms.v 1/04/04 trying to understand my need to


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    dots''ETERNITY'S AGENT''dots
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    Come lay down
    your documented unexplored sculptors
    unexplained international scholar
    of love's endearing weather channels
    be amused by unbelievable variation
    how intimate
    inventing informative
    unforgettable notable moves
    sharing the act of pleasure
    how eternal
    inner beauty lies!
    needs have rights's
    its not medical
    its a reference to life
    how eternal
    phantoms of human creatures transformed
    becoming horizontal detectives
    No! solar superhero
    could actually products
    a comprehensive too deter
    that impending delivery
    of natures true crime
    for it eternity's agent
    its all true
    and just enough
    to be a small Lie !




    Submitted on 2006-04-23 08:24:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a nice write. I like it loads.


    peace
    Grim Aylin
    | Posted on 2007-09-22 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
      you don't edit your writing? Would you like a 3rd eye for typos and such? I can be that eye. Just say the word. Discipline is an imperative for a writer to evolve.
    | Posted on 2006-07-04 00:00:00 | by champagne_shoes | [ Reply to This ]


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