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    dots Submission Name: ''TRUE LOVE'S KISS''dots
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    Author: ms.v
    Elite Ratio:    6.72 - 109/24/20
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       by:ms.v 1/11/04


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    dots''TRUE LOVE'S KISS''dots
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    PRESSED
    upon a moist
    outer ambition
    Love's ambrosia
    is but a kiss
    aurora
    sturdy Fray
    visitor of the nude tongue
    sing to the hart of need
    slow blanket cover me !




    Submitted on 2006-04-23 08:32:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Such a drive and expression in so few words. This piece has an eroticism that sucks you into the world of the poet. Not sure what "apond" means but the sense of the poem is clear.

    I like the notion of "ambrosha" - a far better spelling maybe than "ambrosia" ever is.
    I liked this a lot.
    Warmest thoughts.

    Donald
    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by siradrian | [ Reply to This ]


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