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    dots Submission Name: 'HEE-BEE GEE-BEEZ JUICE'(Rap/crosdots
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    Author: ms.v
    Elite Ratio:    6.72 - 109/24/20
    Words: 339
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 942
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 2028



    Description:
       (Rap/crossover)Halloween


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    dots'HEE-BEE GEE-BEEZ JUICE'(Rap/crosdots
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    Its the middle of midnight
    and my buds got the mind
    to go a seek-en
    for something just a little pass freak-en
    with our hearts in the mood
    to set fright to the doomed
    we began too move slowly out of our graves
    its a fun day
    with all kinds of trills
    just make up a potion
    rub it on the dead
    a few drops on his head
    and me and my homeys
    will wake from the dead
    (hook) it's called HEE-BEE GEE-BEEZ JUICE
    and they say it recalls the belated dead
    in ten minute time or less
    so don't freak-out or lose your head
    when your homey pops out
    and ask
    how long have I've been dead
    with his mouth all dry
    he asks my nigga
    when the last time you dropped by
    and poured a bit of 40-de on my grave
    with your reply
    you try to say
    it must be the cold
    because you know
    you poured some in yesterday!
    digga please!
    dead not dumb
    so I know you brought me some brew
    I'd hate to have to haunt you
    it cool!you know I didn't forget you
    so drink it now and drink it fast
    this potion not going to last
    its for to night only
    so put on this
    pirate suit
    so you won't scare away the girls
    and we'll party
    till it time to go back
    to the morgue
    (hook) Its called HEE-BEE GEE-BEEZ JUICE
    and they say it recalls the belated dead
    HEE-BEE!GEE-BEEZ JUICE!
    Oue!Boo!Juice!
    It wakes ups the spooks
    It been fun it
    been dead
    Thanks!my homey
    for one night from the dead
    but I have a surprise for you
    the devil been asken about you
    he likes the hard work you do
    he told me to let you know that
    if you want to know the day
    you get filled with holes
    is the least he could do! (hook)
    (1st part of rap-lyric)




    Submitted on 2006-04-23 12:11:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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