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    dots Submission Name: I poem I wrote for sumone i lovedots
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    Author: GodLover
    ASL Info:    15
    Elite Ratio:    0.6 - 0/2/5
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsI poem I wrote for sumone i lovedots
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    As i stare into the stars

    I wonder where u are

    My eyes all full of tears

    And as the begin to fall

    u hear me begin to declare that I really care for u

    Then i remember back in november

    When U smiled at me and began to say

    then i said u look like christmas morning

    and The n i take u in my arms and hug u as i would never see u again

    and then we depart from each other

    and i begin to fear u dont feel the same

    about me......






    Submitted on 2006-04-23 12:34:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a sweet poem, but it's hard to really understand what your feeling because I fould the flow a bit off. But I like it is a very beautiful poem and very well done.
    | Posted on 2006-04-24 00:00:00 | by Autum-Moon | [ Reply to This ]



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