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    dots Submission Name: ''NO LONGER'' (R&B/crossovdots
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    Author: ms.v
    Elite Ratio:    6.72 - 109/24/20
    Words: 164
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    Description:
        (R&B/crossover)and the pain of lost love.


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    dots''NO LONGER'' (R&B/crossovdots
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    YOU are the reflection in my tears
    all the moments that I fear
    the sadness that no one can hear
    you have wounded me
    to were it will never heal
    cold and dark are all the places
    were love could be
    why have you abandoned me
    taken it upon yourself
    to make sure I could
    never love someone els
    the small pieces of my heart
    are all so torn apart
    that why I pray for the day
    when you fade from my misery
    with each tear may it wash my soul
    from your holed
    till i no longer think of you
    are the reflection in my tears
    all the moments that I fear
    the sadness NO one!can hear!
    tears wash me clean
    bring me back to realty
    soak my soul
    keep me in your warm hold
    till the day I no longer love you!
    till the time
    runs all my tears dry
    and I think of you
    NO LONGER!




    Submitted on 2006-04-23 13:18:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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